Merge pull request #163 from budziq/passive_voice

Removed passive voice from 7 examples
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David Tolnay 2017-05-25 00:53:01 -07:00 committed by GitHub
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3 changed files with 16 additions and 16 deletions

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[![rand-badge]][rand] [![cat-science-badge]][cat-science] [![rand-badge]][rand] [![cat-science-badge]][cat-science]
A random value within a range `[0, 10)` (not including `10`) is generated with [`Rng::gen_range`]. Generates a random value within `[0, 10)` range (not including `10`) with [`Rng::gen_range`].
```rust ```rust
extern crate rand; extern crate rand;
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[![rand-badge]][rand] [![cat-science-badge]][cat-science] [![rand-badge]][rand] [![cat-science-badge]][cat-science]
[`Normal`] distribution with mean `3` and standard deviation `5` Creates a [`Normal`] distribution with mean `3` and standard deviation `5`
is created. A random value is generated with [`IndependentSample::ind_sample`]. and generates a random value with [`IndependentSample::ind_sample`].
```rust ```rust
extern crate rand; extern crate rand;
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[![rand-badge]][rand] [![cat-science-badge]][cat-science] [![rand-badge]][rand] [![cat-science-badge]][cat-science]
A tuple `(i32, bool, f64)` and variable of user defined type `Point` Randomly generates a tuple `(i32, bool, f64)` and variable of user defined type `Point`.
are randomly generated. In order to allow random generation of `Point` Implements the [`rand::Rand`] trait for `Point` in order to allow random generation.
it needs to implement the [`rand::Rand`] trait.
```rust ```rust
extern crate rand; extern crate rand;

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@ -230,9 +230,9 @@ collected into a `String`.
[![url-badge]][url] [![cat-encoding-badge]][cat-encoding] [![url-badge]][url] [![cat-encoding-badge]][cat-encoding]
A string is encoded into [application/x-www-form-urlencoded] syntax Encodes a string into [application/x-www-form-urlencoded] syntax
using the [`form_urlencoded::byte_serialize`] and subsequently using the [`form_urlencoded::byte_serialize`] and subsequently
decoded with [`form_urlencoded::parse`]. Both functions return iterators decodes it with [`form_urlencoded::parse`]. Both functions return iterators
that can be collected into a `String`. that can be collected into a `String`.
```rust ```rust

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[![url-badge]][url] [![cat-net-badge]][cat-net] [![url-badge]][url] [![cat-net-badge]][cat-net]
Once [`Url`] is parsed it can be sliced with [`url::Position`] to strip unneeded URL parts. Parses [`Url`] and slices it with [`url::Position`] to strip unneeded URL parts.
```rust ```rust
# #[macro_use] # #[macro_use]
@ -269,9 +269,9 @@ fn run() -> Result<()> {
[![reqwest-badge]][reqwest] [![cat-net-badge]][cat-net] [![reqwest-badge]][reqwest] [![cat-net-badge]][cat-net]
The [`reqwest::get`] function parses the supplied url and makes a Parses the supplied URL and makes a synchronous HTTP GET request
synchronous HTTP GET request. Obtained [`reqwest::Response`] with [`reqwest::get`]. Prints obtained [`reqwest::Response`]
status and headers are printed. HTTP response body is read into an allocated [`String`] via [`read_to_string`]. status and headers subsequently reading HTTP response body into an allocated [`String`] via [`read_to_string`].
```rust,no_run ```rust,no_run
# #[macro_use] # #[macro_use]
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[![reqwest-badge]][reqwest] [![tempdir-badge]][tempdir] [![cat-net-badge]][cat-net] [![cat-filesystem-badge]][cat-filesystem] [![reqwest-badge]][reqwest] [![tempdir-badge]][tempdir] [![cat-net-badge]][cat-net] [![cat-filesystem-badge]][cat-filesystem]
Temporary directory is created with [`TempDir::new`] and a file is synchronously Creates a temporary directory with [`TempDir::new`] and synchronously downloads
downloaded over HTTP using [`reqwest::get`]. a file over HTTP using [`reqwest::get`].
Target [`File`] with name obtained from [`Response::url`] is created within [`TempDir::path`] Creates a target [`File`] with name obtained from [`Response::url`] within [`TempDir::path`]
and downloaded data is copied into it with [`io::copy`]. The temporary directory is implicitly removed on `run` function return. and copies downloaded data into it with [`io::copy`].
The temporary directory is automatically removed on `run` function return.
```rust,no_run ```rust,no_run
# #[macro_use] # #[macro_use]